A Song I Wrote

My sister would tell you, "when Chung Fui composes a song: it would be super cheesy and the tune would resemble from some other familiar song." Well, what's wrong when you get inspired by nice song? So I'm emotional, sue me. =)

I wrote a song, pretty nice if I may say so myself (perasan). =P Even my brother rate the lyrics a 8/10 and the tune 7/10. Give me some credits eh? We all have to start somewhere, don't we? It's my best efforts so far.

I actually posted my first video up on You Tube (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7bwi2DMGZJA). Well, this video only covers up from the beginning 2 verses, the bridge and the chorus. Hope you people like it. =P Forgive me for the distortion and a slight delay in picture - sound synchronisation.

Beautiful Eyes

From the moment I saw your eyes,
I knew fate has given me,
a chance to fall in love with them,
before I say goodbye.

It hurts for me to leave,
so tell me you don't want me to go.
A drop of tear is all it takes,
for me to stay by your side.

Oh those beautiful eyes,
just like the stars in the night sky.
If you just look at me this way,
and let me say these words.

Girl, give me a chance,
I'll wipe those tears away,
and I'll make sure,
you'll never shed another tear.
Just look deep into my eyes,
and my heart and soul will be,
forever yours.

He often tells you,
how beautiful your eyes are to him,
but does he know you're crying,
when you're sleeping all alone?

It hurts to see you cry,
and there's nothing that I can do.
Just standing in the corner,
always standing in his shadow.

Oh those beautiful eyes,
they just take my breath away.
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Girl, just give me a chance,
I'll wipe those tears away,
and I'll make sure,
you'll never shed another tear.
Just look deep into my eyes,
and my heart and soul will be,
forever yours.

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Girl, just give me a chance,
I'll wipe those tears away,
and I'll make sure,
you'll never shed another tear.
Just look deep into my eyes,
and my heart and soul will be,
forever yours.

Note: ----- means still uncompleted.

PS: will fill in the blanks when the song's completed.